Monday, July 18, 2011

Riley's Poetic Writing

All of a sudden I heard an enormous yell, “Hurry up!”

“Ok,” I yelled back. It was the day to get my new dog.

“Come on Bryn,” I shouted.

“I am coming,” he shouted back in return.

He hopped in and off we went. When we got to the top secret lace as dad called it there were about seven dogs, six giant snousers and our Russian bear.

Me and Mum and Dad got a snouser. I felt amazing.

Written by Riley

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